Is there something wrong with me?
people are funny,
they say Im crazy!
I try to impress
t...
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Is there something wrong with me?
people are funny,
'they' say I'm crazy!
I try to impress
'they' say i need to be 'me'
I try to be normal
'they' can happy never be
I wonder and wonder
why things go wrong
'they' push me to the corner
and want me to be strong
I want to break free
and set things right
but all that 'they' do
is to fight, fight, fight
I lose my control
i lose my mental frame
'they' talk behind my back
and call me insane
Now, tell me my friends
is something really wrong with me?
people are funny,
'they' say I'm crazy!
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Heyy opulence! Thanks, glad you liked it!
Nice to see you here! Well, 'they' mentioned here is the society and the demanding societal needs one is compelled to satisfy. Get it now? Be it friends, relatives, neighbours... whoever, we kind of live and adjust to the society and satisty them. Thats wat i've tried to convey here.
Thanks for stopping by :)))
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Hi Psyche,
Beautiful! But who are the "They" if they are your friends then they might say things for your good. If the 'they' are not very close to you... i guess you got to just listen and take nothing to heart.
Nice poem :)
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Uhhh vanida, thanks for the info but i wouldnt be interested. :))))
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So true avijee... so true! In a way i really think am crazy though!
Thanks for the funny comment! :)))
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Well if they call me crazy, who cares? They have to do something with their tongue anyeay and with their time.
Avinash
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Gee... for a second i really thought you were considering me to be an insane creature from the way you lovingly said "you are not insane"... i wholeheartedly thank you for that!!
Thank god, am not yet!! hehe... Yes, the purpose of the poem is to bring to light the normal human mentality when they have to face the society!
thanks for stopping by sampathji! :))))
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daer psyche,
the ultimate meaning of life to me is
to break free from all conditioning..
so live and
let go.. no harm. you are not insane...
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Haha sounds rhyming!! limey, that's precisely what i'm trying to tell through this poem... it isnt me who is living 'their' life, its the society in general! get it?
thanks for stopping by! :)))
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Who is 'they' ??
n shud u live accordin to wat 'they' say ... ??
'they' will tell u how to walk.. how to talk .. how to shut up .. can 'they' live yer life ??
so if u try to waste yer time thinkin wat 'they' might say .. u r gonna screw it up anyway ..
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Baby! I think you've centralised your whole opinion with 'woman' as a basepoint! My poem reflects the public as such and their general thought procedure and mentality when they are faced with situations that challenge them to be what they are! you get the hang now???
So what if you're being controversial? You have your set of views, dont you?? Try to appreciate that - it will do you good!
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