The world seems blur to me now
I cannot go on this way anymore
Living a life in perpetual grief
Is there a light at the end after all?
Give me a smile, give me sunshine
Shower me your love
Let me get closer to you
Hold my hands and let’s forget it all
Don’t look at me like that
Don’t hate me for what I’m
I’ve only loved you true
Don’t make me hate myself now
Why is there is no acceptance, no joy
There is just a moment of caustic smile
And tears follow the trails of the lines
Left behind by my plastic smile
Let us forget it, let me live on
Move on to a world beyond the glass
I need to breathe, I need to break free
From the clutches of your indifference
Now, spare me your resentment
Spare me your frustration
I’ve grown tired and my body’s gone cold
Help me get out of this if you can
Or let me jus get out of this world.
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hey that's nice actually
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reminds me of the verse...'hate me 4 whot i am and love me 4 whot i am not!....
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hey thanks so much reffy babe...
ur words are always valued on my pages! yeah, the poem does carry my feelings to a bit... thanks so much for your words... keep visiting! :)
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psyche
wonderful to read your poem..it has your feelings..for me these lines said a lot and meant a lot
Keep writing
reffy
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sophi,
thanks babe! :)
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wow....that was awesomely meloncholic
Gal you rock!!!
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and oh i forgot to mention... thank you all so much for the recommendations! am really honored! thanks again!
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matheikal,
yes.. it indeed is a contrast! thank u for ur lovely comment! :)
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achi...
thanks bud! u're back too after a loooooonggggg time to my blogs... hmmm.. .yeah its bitter but then like u said its probably one of my niche poem... will be coming up with something really nice one soon! :) need i say thanks for the visit btw??? keep visiting boi....
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blizzard,
a warm welcome to my pages... and thank you so much for your lovely words. am glad you liked it! :) thank u once again!
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