The pain’s creeping all over my skin
I wash it away but the tears leave a stain
Do you remember me? Do you remember us?
But I remember your smile that spoke of pain
What have you done? Where did you go?
Why is there such silence in your breath?
Why have you left a scar in my heart?
It now bleeds and aches, do you call this death?
I tremble and toil with my surrogate thoughts
Tell me do you hear me, or am I alone again?
There is no way out and there are no doubts
I’ll leave you now, and in your thoughts I’ll drain.
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hey thank u shivanjali... glad you liked it :)
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Immensely beautiful...so honest and transparent pain...
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achi..... u still around??
where the hell do you keep vanishing every now n then mann?? really glad to have u back here...
and hey, btw i love that song... thanks for liking it pal... jus a phase i believe! keep coming u moron... don jus abscond!
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Heyyy Psyche
Loved it all... a good piece from you aftr a long time...
Lottsa pains and dry feelings...
'Hey Yoh!!...Listen what i Say yo..!!
You spoke ma thoughts girl....
Loved the lines-
But I remember your smile that spoke of pain
luv Achi
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thank you yash ji! :)
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A beautiful and touching poem on longing....Loved it....yash
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and hey thanks so much for the reco girl!
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and oh thanks for ur cute comment too.. :)
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psyche
you write well...:)))))))
where is your entry for the 16 th weekly contest:))))))
reffy
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hittamej!
yeh you're right! ill take ur advice... wont ever stop dreaming!! :)
thank you so much for visiting and leaving your lovely comment!
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